Fusion #1 Page 2

24th Aug 2011, 12:10 AM in Welcome to My Life
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Fusion #1 Page 2
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EssayBee 24th Aug 2011, 12:10 AM edit delete
EssayBee
Here's page 2 of Fusion #1. For these first few issues, I think I'll follow a Monday, Wednesday, Friday upload schedule.
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dumok 24th Aug 2011, 12:34 AM edit delete reply
dumok
WELCOME TO COMIC FURY! I LOVE your artwork!
Invader.Socks 24th Aug 2011, 10:39 AM edit delete reply
Invader.Socks
Is Fusion going to be aware of this new dimension the entire time, like Deadpool is?
StufferofLegends 27th Jan 2012, 11:01 AM edit delete reply
StufferofLegends
Your comic has a great feel to it, it reads a lot better than most Spider-Manesque teenage superhero stories, and Fusion is extremely likable! Consider me hooked.
otterkit 27th Feb 2013, 11:02 AM edit delete reply
otterkit
This is so cute, and the art's gorgeous! Nice work!
EssayBee 27th Feb 2013, 3:39 PM edit delete reply
EssayBee
Thanks for all the kind comments!
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 12th May 2015, 4:52 PM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
I like the Bruce Timm-y pose here.

And, as someone who is rarely a fan of caption boxes, I'm impressed at this new high concept for them. Very interesting take.
EssayBee 12th May 2015, 7:32 PM edit delete reply
EssayBee
Tibbittz--Welcome to Fusion's world! I generally don't like caption boxes either (as hard as that may be to believe--especially after reading this overly caption-loaded first issue). This first issue goes seriously overboard on them. This was my first time transcribing Savunn's life, and I kept waaaay too much of her narration (which, I suppose, helps show what a chatterbox she can be). Savunn was reasonably mortified with the first issue (thinking she came across as way too chatty: "No wonder I annoy the crap out of Brooder," I believe were her exact words on the matter) and instructed me to be much more liberal with my edits in future issues.

Regardless, I hope you get past this first issue without your eyes getting too crossed, and I'm glad you at least like the concept for the captions.