Your comic has a great feel to it, it reads a lot better than most Spider-Manesque teenage superhero stories, and Fusion is extremely likable! Consider me hooked.
Tibbittz--Welcome to Fusion's world! I generally don't like caption boxes either (as hard as that may be to believe--especially after reading this overly caption-loaded first issue). This first issue goes seriously overboard on them. This was my first time transcribing Savunn's life, and I kept waaaay too much of her narration (which, I suppose, helps show what a chatterbox she can be). Savunn was reasonably mortified with the first issue (thinking she came across as way too chatty: "No wonder I annoy the crap out of Brooder," I believe were her exact words on the matter) and instructed me to be much more liberal with my edits in future issues.
Regardless, I hope you get past this first issue without your eyes getting too crossed, and I'm glad you at least like the concept for the captions.
And, as someone who is rarely a fan of caption boxes, I'm impressed at this new high concept for them. Very interesting take.
Regardless, I hope you get past this first issue without your eyes getting too crossed, and I'm glad you at least like the concept for the captions.