Your comic has a great feel to it, it reads a lot better than most Spider-Manesque teenage superhero stories, and Fusion is extremely likable! Consider me hooked.
Tibbittz--Welcome to Fusion's world! I generally don't like caption boxes either (as hard as that may be to believe--especially after reading this overly caption-loaded first issue). This first issue goes seriously overboard on them. This was my first time transcribing Savunn's life, and I kept waaaay too much of her narration (which, I suppose, helps show what a chatterbox she can be). Savunn was reasonably mortified with the first issue (thinking she came across as way too chatty: "No wonder I annoy the crap out of Brooder," I believe were her exact words on the matter) and instructed me to be much more liberal with my edits in future issues.
Regardless, I hope you get past this first issue without your eyes getting too crossed, and I'm glad you at least like the concept for the captions.
