Fusion #14 Page 1

14th Mar 2017, 7:01 AM in Something to Brood About
Fusion #14 Page 1
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EssayBee 14th Mar 2017, 7:01 AM
Here's page 1 of Fusion #14, and we jump back in time 27 years. The Brotherhood of the Flaming Sword was first mentioned back in Issue #11 (http://fusion.thecomicseries.com/comics/332), and you might be able to figure a few other things out about them from the interview with Adam Conroy (beginning at http://fusion.thecomicseries.com/comics/275/).

For those who might've forgotten who Dandy-Lion is, we first met him back in Issue #6 (http://fusion.thecomicseries.com/comics/154/).


Black Rose 14th Mar 2017, 10:40 AM
Will the next few pages cover what happened twenty-seven years ago?
EssayBee 14th Mar 2017, 5:41 PM
This opening scene will tell the beginning of this memory.
Xade 15th Mar 2017, 9:03 AM
ah blast from the pasts are always fun
Coolclaytony 17th Mar 2017, 12:53 AM
I know you felt it necessary to tell the audience what he is the heir of. But I feel the sentence would've flowed better if Richard had just said "Another of your schemes to depose me?"
It just bugs me as all.
EssayBee 20th Mar 2017, 10:33 AM
Yeah, I agree. Many times expository lines like that can be jarring and obviously not realistic dialogue. The original draft had a longer conversation setting up the Brotherhood of the Flaming Sword bit, but it was too long for what I wanted to be a "short" flashback. So I employed my "editorial" judgment as Savunn's transcriber to cut to the meat of the scene (with Savunn's approval, of course).
Black Rose 17th Mar 2017, 8:23 AM
Can you imagine an older version of Richard Wilde-old,receding hairline-being visited by X-Ponent(who be this time is more like Rorschach from the Watchmen).

Wilde(looking at revolver in right hand):I..I wasn't going to point it at you!(tosses gun aside)

X-Ponent:Gun..no license..I checked! VERY BAD!!!

Or should X-Pletive be the Rorschach type???