Fusion #14 Page 32

24th Oct 2017, 7:01 AM in Something to Brood About
Fusion #14 Page 32
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EssayBee 24th Oct 2017, 7:01 AM
Here's page 32 of Fusion #14, and we're moving into the home stretch for this issue. There are still a few surprises and revelations before the issue's end, however.

Next week, look for a special Halloween pic, and then we'll return to the story.

Also, I updated page 25 of this issue to correct the framing for the first panel; I had forgotten to give it a "flashback" panel border when I first posted the page.


Black Rose 24th Oct 2017, 7:20 AM
Cross universes? Again?!?!?
Where is Captain Stupendous anyway?
This is speculation,but should the captain be in the universe of...

Sidekick Girl?
Magical Girl Neil?
Grrl Power?
Sparkling Generation Valkyrie Yuuki?

Just_IDD 24th Oct 2017, 7:45 AM
if it were any of those somebody knows how to get ahold of fusion in this one. They all received special communication spheres. You left off a few, like Energizes world, but I don't think it's that one either I think it's a new one.
O8h7w 24th Oct 2017, 4:27 PM
Didn't Fusion leave the communication sphere with SAS? I think she did, whereby it is very likely one of those universes.
EssayBee 24th Oct 2017, 7:23 PM
She left the sphere with the Fab Five, not SAS. But this upcoming mission will be going into Wandering Whistler territory, and his problems aren't confined to something as small as a multiverse.
Fafhred 24th Oct 2017, 9:50 AM
I vote for Grrl Power: both her and Sidney (Halo) started as supers' fangirls, and both talk a lot xD
Black Rose 24th Oct 2017, 12:43 PM
Just_IDD,if you read the recent Energize Hunted,it seems that Energize is dead!

Also I left out the following:
Lady Spectra and Sparky
Mechagical Girl Lisa A.N.T.(Now Defunct)
The comic Dead Debbie appears in...?!?
aqua 24th Oct 2017, 2:54 PM
dead debbie's comic is finished. true ending not endless hiatus
The Aussie Bloke 24th Oct 2017, 7:24 AM
Third panel typo: "plenty to about" should probably be "plenty to talk about"
EssayBee 24th Oct 2017, 9:15 AM
Crap. Must've deleted that when I was adjusting linebreaks.Thanks for the heads up! I'll get it corrected shortly.
O8h7w 24th Oct 2017, 4:24 PM
And another one in the next-to-last panel, where the bold "is" has been misplaced in the sentence.
NoRAd 24th Oct 2017, 7:54 PM
No, that one is kind of awkwardly phrased, but grammatically correct.
EssayBee 24th Oct 2017, 10:18 PM
NoRAd is correct. It's awkwardly phrased. This was how it was originally written, then I thought about changing it, but ultimately left it as originally written. I decided changing it would've been editorial overreach, and the awkward phrasing was how Savunn originally spoke it. This is one of those things that frequently nags at me: Do I rewrite for smoothness or let some awkward phrasing remain as I originally "heard" it. A lot of times I go for smoothness, but other times a bit of awkwardness seems to ring more true/less scripted.
Just_IDD 30th Oct 2017, 11:37 PM
the awkward phrasing as the side benefit of making the text fit in a normal sized word balloon. It is, as was already mentioned, grammatically correct.

it may be easier to see if you put the commas in too!

Sav is being snarky here, because Adam has cut short, her well-planned expose of his vigilante origins.

Can you at least tell me what this mission is, that you volunteered me for, before I head out?
O8h7w 7th Nov 2017, 3:29 PM
Putting the word "that" in there is what makes it grammatically correct to me, not the commas. I stand by my opinion that the sentence as it stands is plain wrong _to me_, but I may very well be using a slightly stricter standard for this language than I would if I were a native speaker.
O8h7w 7th Nov 2017, 3:34 PM
I forgot to note that since it is what Savunn said, it is what it is, do not modify. Plenty has been said that seemed jumbled to me.
KLCtheBookWorm 24th Oct 2017, 10:07 AM
Great, I'm the one with cross-dimenional experience now. :D
EssayBee 24th Oct 2017, 10:21 PM
I suspect that was one reason Brooder volunteered her. I'm sure we'll hear a bit more about this next issue.